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Friday 14 October 2016

Marshall writhing 2016

On a dark and cold night the wind howled this little girl was getting some water  from the water well. She heard something so she look around and got scared then she went back to pulling the bucket out. She heard something sneaking around then she dropped the bucket and looked around.

She didn’t see anything so she turned but then a mysterious light shined upon her. She froze for a second and turned around. She saw a mysterious ghost was right behind her. He had one big eye and they looked like stars were in side him and he was blue.



She screamed the ghost hid behind a hill then he got up and and looked around and blew shiny glitter over her she smiled. Then he picked her and and put on her feet. The ghost picked up the bucket out of the well and gave the bucket to the girl. Then the ghost flew back up to the sky and his body camouflaged into the sky  and his eye became the moon and then the girl went back inside and told all of her family.


Every night the ghost comes down and plays with the girl they were best friends forever.

1 comment:

  1. I like your describing words I like how You described the ghost
    Next time maybe work on your paragraphs but well done

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