Should students get paid to go to school?
I think students should get paid because they could use the money for school supplies
and it would encourage students to go to school.
and it would encourage students to go to school.
Students should get paid to go to school because it would encourage them to school because
they could have the money to buy whatever they want as a reward. For example, they could buy
food, shoes or clothes.
they could have the money to buy whatever they want as a reward. For example, they could buy
food, shoes or clothes.
Some students don't have devices to work on so they can't work on the same level as students
with devices. They could use the money to buy a device they could also buy new uniform clothes or
just some new clothes.
with devices. They could use the money to buy a device they could also buy new uniform clothes or
just some new clothes.
Hi, marshall your eassy is perfect and there is nothing to fix on your essay.
ReplyDeleteYou have some great points here, Marshall!
ReplyDeleteI like how you have a question at the start to get the reader thinking before you write about your main points.
I agree that the extra money could help encourage students to be at school - especially to get a device.
The next step in your writing would be adding a conclusion that gets the reader to do something with the information you have given.